My “ah-ah”
moment is not the good kind, what I discovered is related to the syntax in
English, I found a difference between French and English. During highschool and during my college English classes, I
learned that the way we write essays are much different
in French than English and this is a perfect example. I was translating a
document until I stumbled upon what seemingly was a needlessly long sentence.
In French, you can’t simply write non-stop and put commas everywhere. You need
to cut it down or else it’s a mess. In English, on the other hand, you can do
that without any problem. So there I was
scratching my head trying to find a way to put all that big wall of text in
French! I will definetely keep that in mind while writing in English that I don't necessarly need to cut down my sentences all the time.
What I said
Me: Hi, I
am Marc-Antoine Béchard, from Cégep André-Laurendeau. I would like to talk
about the internship.
Supervisor:
Excuse me?
Me: I think
Christi talked to you about me?
Supervisor:
Wait... Are you .... Marc..?
Me: Yes,
that’s me. I would like to talk about the translation work.
Supervisor:
Our first project was cancelled, because we didn’t hear from you last weekend.
The next one will only available on January 9th.
Me: Oh...
So there’s no work for me until the 9th?
Supervisor:
The other project was scrapped, but I would have you come in on the 9th
for our other project.
Me: Oh
okay, I will come on the 9th.
The conversation went on for a little bit but
ended shortly after that
What I would say in the future
Me: Hello,
I am the student from André-Laurendeau, here to talk about the translation
work.
Supervisor:
Oh! Hold on a second... you must be ... Marc?
Me: Yes, I
see Christi told you about me.
Supervisor:
Yes, well unfortunately, our last project was cancelled because we did not hear
from you last weekend. The next project we have will only be available on the 9th.
Me: Okay, I
will be there on the 9th.
Supervisor:
Okay, see you then.
Saying too much information all at once to someone you have never talked to in the past can be confusing, especially is you mix up English pronounciation for some words and French pronounciations too in the same sentence!